大学英语作文手机_大学英语作文手机对学生的影响

　　2015年6月英语四级参考作文解析

　　手机与上学

　　•Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start you essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on the kid’s understanding of going to school. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 150 words.

　　作文图片

　　写作思路

　　•1、本题首段应简要描述图画，指出当代有些年轻人认为手机可以取代上学。

　　•2、次段最好进行正反论证，说明手机虽然可以帮助获得大量信息，但无法取代教育，教育绝非仅仅是获取信息。

　　•3、第三段最好提出建议措施：我们应该合理使用手机，同时学校教育必不可少、不可或缺。

　　例文：

　　It is subtly revealed in the portrayal that a young boy is talking with his mother in their house. The boy asks confusingly, “Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything?”

　　如图所示，一个小孩正在家中和他的母亲谈话。这个男孩疑惑地问：“如果我的手机已经知道一切了，我为什么还要去上学呢?”

　　We often hear of successful peoplewho are largely “self-taught”. I say largely because, in all cases, they havereceived some formal teaching, whether it was from a teacher in a classroom, orfrom parents or a relative at home. In my case, I am glad I always learned fromteachers, from first gradeall the way through my Master’s degree. A good teacher adds considerably to thematerials contained in the textbooks

　　我们常听人说某某成功人士多半靠“自学”成才。 之所以说“多半”是因为所有的成功人士都曾接受过正规教育，有的是在教室里听老师讲课，有的是在家里由父母或亲属给上课。拿我来说，我很庆幸从大一一直到硕士研究生毕业我都在跟着老师学。一位好的老师可以教给你许多课本材料以外的东西。

　　In conclusion, it takes a great deal of self-discipline to learn a subject via mobile phones with only self-study, having no guidance or instruction from a teacher. A skilled and talented teacher can add so much richness to what is being learned. I believe it is always better to have a teacher to some degree.

　　总之，在没有老师指点的情况下，通过手机自学一门学科需要严格的自律。而一位经验丰富且有才华的教师能教给你许多书本知识以外的东西。所以我想，在某种程度上，有老师教总归更好。

　　重点词汇：

　　reveal

　　•vt.显露； 揭露； 泄露；

　　•n.揭示，展现； [建]门侧，窗侧；

　　•词组搭配 be revealed in … 被发现…/被显示在…

　　•例句

　　–End - user information will be revealed in a multi - line editor frame.将最终用户信息显示在一个多行编辑框里

　　–O may thy beauty be revealed in me.噢,愿你的美尽展于我身

　　via

　　•prep.经过;通过,凭借;取道

　　•The news reached me via my aunt.那消息是通过我婶婶转告我的。

　　•They have arrived at a solution via scientific investigation.他们通过科学的调查研究得出了解决问题的办法。

　　•Mr Baker will return home via Britain and France.贝克先生将取道英国和法国回国。

　　重点词组

　　inall cases

　　•在所有的情况下/全部病例

　　•.The same argument doesn't hold good in all cases.同一论点并非对所有情况都适用.

　　•相关词条 in all these cases 上述情况

　　•in all these cases the electricity is caused the rubbing of one thing against another .上述情况，电都是由一种物质与另一种物质摩擦而产生的。

　　agreat deal of

　　•大量的；许多；

　　•This involved the deletion of a great deal of irrelevant material. 这包括删除很大一部分不相关的内容。

　　•相关词条 think a great deal of 对..评价高/非常看重/印象很好

　　•The workers think a great deal of you.工人们对你印象很好

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